out in the open

out in the open

A Poem by ghostwritermc

Its easy to blend in,

standing out still remaining hidden,

within emotions that are not known to be real or not,

under subliminal manipulation,

causing the re configuration of a human into a robot...

 

Free will, pre conditioned with no permission,

a free mind is a mind that don't listen,

nor is it trapped by a picture takken to blur ones vision...  

 

 

© 2010 ghostwritermc


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exceptional potrayal of the numbed somnabulation of epic proportions like a disease affecting humanity nursed from the get go by mindless media oversaturation we're all exposed to from infancy on~

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it! Nice rhyme scheme and it seems like it could be a quote! great job here!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good job. We allow ourselves to be conditioned and programmed in many different ways. Should the "or" in the third line be "are?"

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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ghostwritermc
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