My Rain

My Rain

We’ve seen some good times, been through some bad times,

Been somewhere between laughter and the rain,

Where I needed your hand to hold on to,

Yes, all I’ve wanted was you.

We don’t need sand castles made of stone,

To remember our first dance, our first kiss,

Picture my life with you and by you I’ll stand,

Here to share the laughter, the joy, and the pain.

You are my flesh, you are my blood,

I’ll be your sun, you be my rain,

I am the air that you breathe,

But on my soul I swear, for you I will be there.

In times of heartache and times of change,

I thank you for sharing your life with me,

For giving me a reason to believe,

And for loving me for being who I am….

6/15/2005

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and amazing poetry for love.
"You are my flesh, you are my blood,
I’ll be your sun, you be my rain,
I am the air that you breathe,
But on my soul I swear, for you I will be there"
I love the above lines. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ghost]

Thank you so much, I sometimes try to find inspiration from music, movies, other writers and I still don't know where it all comes from... Anyways thank you for your comment

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well. A amazing poem and you are welcome.

[Relic]

I can see this was written with a big and loving heart. A spouse couldn't ask for anything more.

Nicely done, Ghost.

[Ghost]

Big heart yes... Spouse no, girlfriend... I certainly do love her..

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Wonderful and yes doesn’t the rain just wash clean and bring fresh hope and all things new- I can smell it now- freshness of new earth new day- wonderful words🌹

[Ghost]

Thank you, and yes the rain is cleansing, refreshing.. Thanks for a nice comment

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Always my pleasure🌹

[Sami Khalil]

A song of love and romance coupled soft expressions. Glad you have joined us on this cafe.

[Ghost]

Thank you for the comment and thanks you for the welcome..

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[tracey]

hi ghost, im quite new to site just started reading some of your writes, loved it it just flowed full of romance you done some great pieces ,i will be reading some more

[Ghost]

Thank you so much and welcome to The WritersCafe...

[Neville]

This is without any doubt a most romantic write, and a true expression of love... Fine words indeed my friend & so glad to learn you are having a decent day. Here's to some more.......N

[Ghost]

Thanks Neville.. I have the good days, and bad ones so it was nice to have the decent day back to back... Thanks for the comment on the poem.

[Neville]

No problem, my pleasure......N

[sette]

this is one romantic poem, the rain will always be a special memory to you. how are you doing?

[Ghost]

I had a decent day, thank you for asking.. And yes rain has many special moments.

[sette]

that is good to know