Hard Road

Hard Road

I don't know where I am, and I don't know if I care,

At this moment in time, I can't even see what’s in front of me,

So, tell me, how do I catch my breath?

When I feel the hurt, the pain of my broken heart.

I sometimes don't know where my head is at,

Whether I am at the beginning or the end of my thoughts,

All I know is the feeling of heaviness in my chest,

And the emotions that wash out of me.

I fight and live with hardships and struggles,

Battling the scars left behind by the storms and the sorrows,

Depression comes like a thief without warning,

Whatever the cost, it's a small price I pay,

Silently, my eyes cloud with tears,

And without hesitation, I continue down the long hard road...

  7/10/2017

Reviews

[Donna]

I can feel your pain while reading this. Having a broken heart is so painful, it really is. I only had my heart broken one time and it was horrible, and even after 4 years, I still am not completely over it. That was nicely written and I can totally relate to it.

[Ghost]

Thank you for your review... Yeah I still feel the pain, but she knows I love her and would like to make it work..

[Donna]

I hope it does work put for you.

[Wild Rose]

Sometimes feel like that
Too much to do; which job to do first

I stop and forget the list of jobs and things put them to one side and try to find a diversion
Anything that requires my full atention

works most times & you come back refreshed

[Ghost]

Thank you for your comment...

[Wild Rose]

Thanks for posting

[sette]

it is really a hard road but there is one goal to do and that is to win in the end

[Ghost]

Thank you Lisette I am working on the winning in the end... Thank you for a nice compliment..

[sette]

yes you will win with the right mindset that is, it is wonderful to read my real name here thanks my friend can i now call you earl?

[Les]

Donna, this is my favourite of yours yet. Lots of raw emotion in the words and a subject that I'm sure a lot of us can relate to, each in our own way. Beautiful.

[Ghost]

Sorry this isn't Donna's... I wrote this and I thank you for what you said... I hope you don't change your thoughts since it isn't Donn's write..

[Les]

Ghost, my profuse apologies. I looked at this early this morning and clearly I wasn't as wide awake as I thought I was. But, no, it diesn't change at all my reaction to this piece, it was beautifully written.

[Ghost]

Thank you Les... Would you consider being added as a friend??

[Les]

That's fine buddy, go for it.