My Red Rose

stop and smell the roses.

She reminds me

of a

bright red rose.

 

Growing and blooming

in the light  misty rain,

as it does

in the bright sun,

in the heat of the

day.

 

Showing its soft pedeled

beauty,

to the one who loves,

the bright red rose,

and finds himself,

loving her.

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

100/100

it was amazing i loved it
good work
i'd love to read more:)

[Miss Coral]

Cute piece, but I would recommend expanding your word choice, and checking spelling errors. Otherwise, nice job.

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Really liked this just one suggestion: try using a capitals in the like "Bright Red Rose" it'll add extra emphasis, just if that's what you're going for likes.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this is really cute. I think whoever you wrote this for would really appreciate it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Sara Mercury]

One might well find this poem a bit erotic. (No offence.) But, then, that's a good thing. :)