My Red Rose

stop and smell the roses.

She reminds me

of a

bright red rose.

 

Growing and blooming

in the light  misty rain,

as it does

in the bright sun,

in the heat of the

day.

 

Showing its soft pedeled

beauty,

to the one who loves,

the bright red rose,

and finds himself,

loving her.

Reviews

[ROSALIND]

I love this it reminds of the meaning of my name awesome brilliant

[Elizabeth Boughner]

Short and sweet, it is a very nice poem. I like it when people bring nature into poems. It for some reason makes me love poetry even more. Keep up the good work (:

[misha]

This is really good, I enjoyed it; keep it up.

[the in between]

very vivid and beautiful :) i pictured everything. Keep writing. and Excellent flow. :D

[Molly]

Are you sure you aren't e.e cummings reincarnated? Your writing style really reminds me of his (and that's a good thing!) I love the simplicity. One note: petaled is misspelled (Hope I'm not being obnoxious, just trying to help!)

[kylie]

This is very good. By comparing her to such a rose, you really describe her beauty without actually giving details of her. Very beautiful poem!

[Patricia(:]

- Thiss poem was really good . I love how you compare this girl to a bright red rose; true beauty in your words. The ending is a magnificent touchh 'And finds himself loving her' (:

[Poetry Girl]

this poem reminds me of the poem I wrote called Candles. at the end it talks about stopping and smelling the roses. this is a good poem and i enjoyed reading it :) well done

[Luna Northstar]

Awwwwww, soooo sweet! I love love poetry. I think it's so.. sweet! Once again, your descriptions are amazing!

[Cherry Blossom]

love it so sweet