Wet

is that music I hear?

outside I go

leaves dance as the wind grows

sky so melancholy

shadows deepen

sun hides

a drop, a single drop

sky alights

air shakes

earth rumbles

sky empties

so cold

so heavy

arms capture from behind

I turn

lips

warm

wet

the rain flows as I enjoy

Reviews

[Ethyl Spirits]

Hmm. Well seeing as I'm not exactly fit to give an analysis of forms of writing asides from stories, blogs, novels, etc- I'll try not to muck this compliment up and leave it as a job well done :)
I liked it.
It was cute :D aha