Blue Moon

The moons collide.
In opposite directions, violently, magnificent.
Lonely days, painful days
And the nights I find myself shouting at the Moon.

Reviews

[B]

It is actually quite a piece
and its unique
you have a melancholic tone
coupled with movement
and a moving body the moon

this is genius

[Ghazal]

Thanks darling ;) you see beauty where others may only see darkness

[B]

Thank you
just being honest :)

[Ghazal]

lol I don't consider it as that good for a group read

[Dani The Unreviewed]

it is good enough :) the group needs more members, and more writing on the page. Do submit it. :)

[Ghazal]

Ok dear ...

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Group page -> Writing -> Submit -> Select writing -> Submit

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, lets see. :) beautiful imagery, and got me thinking about the meaning. Nicely done. :) submit it to the group's writing page, so members can read. :)