lost

I've long lost myself before you left,

it left a broken heart of what was once fixed.

Maybe I chose to live in fantasy,

fantasy with him,

but I never knew if he ever wanted that world with me.

I have fallen far.

I was with him in a magical place,

him with all the stars.

And then you faded away

like dust,

left so sudden.

No balance

No energy

No more beautiful night sky

He was the only light.

Now it's all about tunnel covered in dark

No light with me

Now I just sit with darkness...

Reviews

[Gabby The GAB]

"And then you faded away
like dust,
left so sudden."
Fav lines :))

It's great to read poems concerning the night sky from time to time. The peace, the scenery, the epitome of chilling is tru with the night sky too, well that's for me tho.

PS: I recommend you to read my "favorite color" poem, it might comfort you in a way against tru the darkness :)))

[ggubie]

the night sky reminds me of someone I love, I look up to it while reminiscing memories with him.
read morethe night sky reminds me of someone I love, I look up to it while reminiscing memories with him.

Will surely check your "favorite color" poem, again. Thank you for the review, gabby!!