Promising

I cannot be blind to the things I've seen.

And the road is rough,

and the road is mean.

If you hold my hand maybe you can breathe,

I will calm your fears,

I will sweeten your dreams.

Shush darlin' wait til the morn'

we can live for tomorrow

just hold onto my arm,

I will open my eyes,

and you open your heart.

Shush darlin' we will never part.

We will never part.

I cannot stand up until I fall down.

But the dirt is still,

so I'll stay on the ground.

If you love me so won't you carry me home,

and then clean my wound

until I'm free to roam?

Shush darlin' wait til the morn'

we can live for tomorrow

just hold onto my arm,

I will open my eyes,

and you open your heart.

Shush darlin' we will never part.

No, we will never part.

The sky gets dark,

and the people cry,

but the sky gets bright,

and the light of you shines,

so if you don't mind can I ask,

you to glow and brighten my past,

and I- I will- will promise to you..

just hold onto my arm,

I will open my eyes,

and you open your heart.

Shush darlin' we will never part.

No, we will never part.

I'd promised it at the start,

I swear we will never part.

Reviews

[Andrew Dane Parker]

This is so good. Beautiful is actually the right word for this. My favorite line was: "If you love me so won't you carry me home, and then clean my wound until I'm free to roam?" That was marvelous. Keep up the good work!

[Fornever Always]

Thank you!

[Andrew Dane Parker]

Your welcome!