walked

walked

A Poem by gg
"

a walking journey

"

i walked in

to begin

and failed to find

the door that leads to somewhere

 

i began and

so i stand

in the midst nowhere

 

i walked and walked

and tried to talk

my way into the void

 

a gap appeared

my mind reared

i faired forth with hopes of plaines unknown

© 2012 gg


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Thanks for submitting an entry to the sci-fi poetry contest. This poem was well written, but i don't really consider it to be science fiction.
Like i said though, the poem was well written and I hope you continue to write poems and other great pieces.

Keep up the good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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im a new guy to writing, recent life change has given me alot of free time and the most productive and enjoyable thing i could think to do is write. fiction! love it!! more..