Round, and Round, and Round

Listening to a Trevor Hall song - Karma and this came - a bit forced.

We go Round and Round

Bein' on this Planet

Round and Round

In My Head

We Go Round and Round

Karma with it's Hold

Round and Round

I've never been this Bold

Can we get off this Merry Go Round

Will we Ever Learn

Round and Round

Before all our Oil we Burn

We go Round and Round

At least I'm Seein' Now

Some Still Blind as Rocks

Know there's a Way, I'm Findin' How

We go Round and Round

We all got things to Learn

Round and Round

It's my Own Truth I Yearn

We go Round and Round

For a Moment I Remember

Round and Round

I Remember the Mama's voice I Heard

We go Round and Round

For Days I Forget

Round and Round

Break Karma or another Regret

We go Round and Round

I'll let Mama hold me Today

Round and Round

It's all so Easy some Say

Reviews

[Victor Warui]

I like the way you use repetition in this poem. It makes it easy to recite and musical. One cant help but sing along. Quite an innovative way to capture the audience attention and deliver the message effectively.