Eclipse Talk

What's up with everyone chasing the Shadow - the Eclipse.

We are all being Spoken to by the Cosmos - it's always been - it's just that more and more are now listening and finding keys ways of improving what they hear and in bringing them in and integrating will all that is being said and felt. We are waking up, finally, I think we are waking ... Oh don't go back to Sleep - oh No - Now that you are finally Awake - oh don't Go, don't Go and Fall back to Sleep - No ... Now that you can finally See ... Oh Don't, No don't Fall back to Sleep. Now that you are Awake - after all that Sleeping - Don't Fall, no don't fall back to Sleep, Not Now , We are about to make a Shift , please you can make it. I'll do anything, I'll do anything - just let me know - where you wanna go - I'll do anything that we could share a few more tomorrows, you know when the sun is goin' down , you got to wonder - how many more do we really have - and how many are we Promised - We never know, we never know = what lies just around the Bend - every evening when the Sun is hanging low, it reminds me of my own sky, where's my sun - how many more sunsets will these Eyes See , I sometime wonder how many more, will He grace me with My Child - I'm holding tight I'm holding tight, But still that Sun it falls outta Sight, yah I Say = Hold me tight - hold me Tight - Hold Me .. All through the Night - Hold Me - Hold Me all through the Night. Hold Me - Mama - Hold Me, Hold Me Papa - Hold Us - Mama - Hold us all - keep us warm Mama Keep us Safe - Mama Hold Me - Hold Me Please - Mama Hold Me Hold Me.

 It's rare and it's not far off - so I don't think it's surprising to me - if I had leave I'd run to the Shadow - People are always chasing the Sun - Right ... Oh Shadow cast on Me, Shadow Cast on Me, it use to get control, but not no More - I use to think it was Me, but not no more, no not no more. Shadow Cast on Me, It use to be hard to See , or so we Thought - it's always those thoughts, gettin' in our Way, we all seem to have so much debt to Pay, but what is there that you really owe, as long as you still got your Soul, consider yourself a fortunate one, for so many sold them so long ago, they don't even remember what triggered it, It was surely something that shook us all, there's been so many things that shake down our walls, so much ahead so much behind us, our own beauty just might Blind us, where we gonna go, when there is no where left to Run - I think I'll just sit here and let it all burn in the Sun - I'm so tired of War, so tired of Pain, I'm gonna go wash me in the Rain - I'm gonna go find me a waterfall and just climb in it, if there is room you can come, or just wait a minute soon your Turn , with everything we'll take our time - with every little thing we'll take our time Now - because we know, we just know - we don't have too, we don't have too know Why - now don't be Shy - take a step in the right Direction, bring spirit in and don't let go - no don't You let Go, take Spirit In and don't you let Go - and don't you Run, don't run anymore - we are goin' to take some time to Soar - and we won't forget to Ground - No we won't forget to Ground - now that we found each other - a million people all around - I reached out and it was You - it was You - I turned around and it was you - it was you. And I sung to you my Song - I said - I had lost it All - yes - I had lost IT ALL- ... But then I found it ALL again, Found it all again - in my, in my Caribbean Blue - oh it Sure looks good on You, oh my, oh my Caribbean Blue. Yes, it sure looks good on You - I found it All - I found Me - oh I found You, in My, In My - oh it looks so good on You ... I found Me - I found You in my, in my Caribbean Blue - My Caribbean Blue. It sure looks, it sure looked mighty find on You, oh My, Oh My, My Caribbean Blue, My Caribbean Blue. 😃😍🙏

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Thanks to Emmajoy for read-requesting me on this one *smile* I normally feel critical of stream-of-consciousness writing when the writer takes no time to add some artfulness to it. This is what I mean by stream of consciousness that seems like a willy-nilly spill of sentiments, but it's clearly been crafted with creativity & vivid imagery & chock full of fresh ideas. In a couple places, it felt a little repetitive to me, but I realize that's the style & it goes well together despite my preconceived opinion. Clearly an authentic piece of writing from the heartful mind.

[Healing Star]

thank you for your kind words and encouragement, sometimes I just let things roll out of me, and most times those are the best writes of all.

[Coyote Poetry]

All of us are chasing something. I liked the poem. You took the reader with you to thoughts about eclipse and I liked the ending. Nice to end the tale with a song. Thank you for sharing the amazing tale. I liked this one.
Coyote

[Healing Star]

thanks, Coyote - I love it when people hear the tune that it came to me in, I love words that flow to a Harmony, or Chorus - I LOVE IT!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem and you are welcome.

[emmajoy]

'.. don't let go - no don't You let Go, take Spirit In and don't you let Go - and don't you Run, don't run anymore - we are goin' .. .. .. '

This is a canvas of extraordinary depth and emotion! You romp and fly your thoughts and words, then somehow convert them into a surreal piece of music too, especially at the end - or seems to me.
Life has its exquisites, its pitfalls, but sights and feelings create differences that sweep away the negative or perhaps neutrality, and create reality about them - superbly, unbelievably vivid. There is a place.. and time.. and being..

[Healing Star]

emmajoy thank you for your beautiful feelings and words - yes, the end is a song I wrote in the Caribbean in June - and I was looking for the bar and I asked a girl, and to my surprise out of the thousands there it was a girl I knew and we smiled and gave each other a hug, and I sung two lines from this to her. thank you again for your beautiful words, just what I needed to hear this morning. Bless you my Dear