All I Bring

All I Bring

A Poem by Healing Star
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When we come to meet our Baba, we bring our All.

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All I can Feel
All I can See
All I can Want
All I can Breathe

All I can Know
All I can Sow
All I can Touch
All I can Hold

All I can Be
All I can Trust
All I can Love
All I can Free

All I can Wonder
All I can Dream
All I can Build
All I can Beam

All I can Create
All I can Leave
All I can Give
All I can Align

All I can Lift
All I can Balance
All I can Heal
All I can Dance

All I can Sing
All I can Reveal
All I can Open
All I can Seal

This is All
I Bring to your Table
This is All
I Bring to You Now

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CBH
I love the ending so much, it's a great shift. If I'm honest, I got caught up in all the repetition; it sort of made the verbs seem unconnected. I would've loved a better connection between what was written, but overall I appreciated the sentiment.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on February 26, 2017
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Healing Star
Healing Star

South Jordan, UT



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I am a man who has finally realized he needs to write down what matters to him, that I might learn from myself, what is important, what I value. To capture who I am now, for that is all we have is no.. more..

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