Places

A Bret Dennen song is rattling in my brain, and so I thought I'd make use of it.

There are places in my Attic

There are places beneath my Floor

Sometimes there is only Static

But at times it hits me to the Core

There are places that feel Weakened

There are places where I feel Pain

Sometimes I feel Threatened

But at times I say bring on the Rain

There are places that connect with Mother

There are places that bring down the Stars

Sometimes I'm connected like no Other

But at times feel I've been placed on Mars

There are Children that I feel so close To

There are Ghosts that come to haunt Me

Sometimes I do what I'm suppose To

But sometimes I just don't feel a Need

There are places that are so Inviting

There are places that I feel so at Home

Sometimes I wonder if other get what I'm Writing

Still sometimes I feel so all Alone

There are places that are made for Dancing

There are places made for getting things Done

Sometimes I wonder if all I'm doing is Prancing

And sometimes I feel your Heart I've Won

Is it all suppose to be this Crazy

I sometimes wonder is there something I'm Missing

It's probably just that I've always been Lazy

But I never question the moments when we've been Kissing

I think that one day we are going to be Shown

I think that one day we will all finally See

Yes, and one day we will all find we are Home

And that within us we have always held the Key

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

My god. You should see my mess.
"Is it all suppose to be this Crazy
I sometimes wonder is there something I'm Missing
It's probably just that I've always been Lazy
But I never question the moments when we've been Kissing"
I agree with the above lines. I have everything, everywhere. I liked the thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Healing Star]

thanks Coyote - I'm glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.