You know, I'll tell you. I was a see-it-to-believe it kind of guy, although I knew things had to be real. I worked even in a cemetary when I was younger. Then, I could see it. Faith constitutes belief in the unseen. So where do I stand? I am never sure.
But this poem? Now this is good. I love when people express themselves. It resembles the lines in my poetry, (albeit horrible, my poetry seems cheap and forced, not sure if people actually like them these days.)
But I love this! Great work :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
thank you so much. Hey, if you think your writing seems forced then it is carrying that energy. Ho.. read morethank you so much. Hey, if you think your writing seems forced then it is carrying that energy. How about not thinking that thought again. Go to YouTube and Listen to SOJA - Easier from Amidst the Noise and Haste. It's Easier, It's Easier, So much Easier when you don't Try. And one day when I was in a park below my home, looking up at lone peak, from the middle of a large open area, they whispered to me - It Already Is, It Already Is = Your Creation - you don't need to worry about it. It Already Is - I have a poem I wrote about it, or maybe a journal. thanks again, blessings. Don't forget we will meet in that field one day, no matter which paths we each take, we're gonna meet up in that field - out past those ideas about wrong doing and right doing. And we won't be Doing - We'll be Being - Cause that's what we are after all - even all of this relentless freakin' Doing - and we need to return to Human BEINGS - being - remember how to Be, Allow, Trust, Accept - All that we are, All that Is, and All that will ever Be, and just simply Be - We have help - we just need to say, I'm ready to move on from here, and I will do what you show, please, show me. Easier, So much Easier, when you don't Try.
You know, I'll tell you. I was a see-it-to-believe it kind of guy, although I knew things had to be real. I worked even in a cemetary when I was younger. Then, I could see it. Faith constitutes belief in the unseen. So where do I stand? I am never sure.
But this poem? Now this is good. I love when people express themselves. It resembles the lines in my poetry, (albeit horrible, my poetry seems cheap and forced, not sure if people actually like them these days.)
But I love this! Great work :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
thank you so much. Hey, if you think your writing seems forced then it is carrying that energy. Ho.. read morethank you so much. Hey, if you think your writing seems forced then it is carrying that energy. How about not thinking that thought again. Go to YouTube and Listen to SOJA - Easier from Amidst the Noise and Haste. It's Easier, It's Easier, So much Easier when you don't Try. And one day when I was in a park below my home, looking up at lone peak, from the middle of a large open area, they whispered to me - It Already Is, It Already Is = Your Creation - you don't need to worry about it. It Already Is - I have a poem I wrote about it, or maybe a journal. thanks again, blessings. Don't forget we will meet in that field one day, no matter which paths we each take, we're gonna meet up in that field - out past those ideas about wrong doing and right doing. And we won't be Doing - We'll be Being - Cause that's what we are after all - even all of this relentless freakin' Doing - and we need to return to Human BEINGS - being - remember how to Be, Allow, Trust, Accept - All that we are, All that Is, and All that will ever Be, and just simply Be - We have help - we just need to say, I'm ready to move on from here, and I will do what you show, please, show me. Easier, So much Easier, when you don't Try.
I am a man who has finally realized he needs to write down what matters to him, that I might learn from myself, what is important, what I value. To capture who I am now, for that is all we have is no.. more..