It's Christmas

It's Christmas silly, no need to explain.

The snow has fallen on the Trees

And all I gotta do this Christmas Day

Is feel the blessings as they Fall

On the dearest ones who have come to Play

Oh it's Christmas, it's Christmas

And with all of Mine I feel so Blessed

Can you hear the Bells they're Ringing

All the Children's Hearts are Singing

The eyes are poppin' right out of their Holes

The Hearts are Beating right out of there Clothes

And when they smile right back at Me

There is nothing like it, I'm so Happy

Oh it's Christmas, it's Christmas

And with all of Mine I feel so Blessed

Can you hear the Bells they're Ringing

All the Children's Hearts are Singing

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

"The eyes are poppin' right out of there HolesThe Hearts are Beating right out of there Close"
I enjoyed everything except these two lines.Try (There eyes are popping right out of their head,and their hearts are racing while on Santa's sled.I try to rhyme every line or alternating lines personally but is shows the joy and laughter of Christmas keep up the good work

[Healing Star]

Thank you, yeah I agree - I was a little disconnected when I wrote this one. Some I will come back and do some work on one day, but they capture a framework. Like my songs that I sit down and press record, it's not something that is ready for sharing really but it captures an image to be polished later. Have a beautiful holiday and thanks for sharing. See if you can find my Day After Christmas poem from last year, I was into that one.

[MomzillaNC]

Very sweet revelry you've portrayed.

NOTES: Not "there" but "their" and not "close" but "clothes"

[Healing Star]

thanks I'll edit, was not really into this when it came, but it captured an image.

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Gee]

Everything is there to construct a nice rhyming poem but as is didn't flow or rhyme to well,and I'm a rhyming type myself.

[Healing Star]

Yeah, I was not totally into this one. But it did capture an idea to be polished later, maybe I'll finish it next Christmas. Have a beautiful Holiday, stay in your Heart.