Make My Move

A Van Morrison song was running through my head with horns, and this came out.

I've been waiting for the Sky to Fall

I've been waiting for nothing at All

When I look up, all I see is Blue

When I look down, all I wanna see is You

I've been waiting for the story to End

I've just been waiting for you my Friend

When I whistle, it's a happy Tune

All I smell is your sweet Perfume

I've been waiting on the big Ol' World

I've been waiting to say these Words

When I hummmm everything seems more Right

I wanna find you when I reach out at Night

I've been waiting for a looking Glass

I've been waiting for the moment that will Last

When I look up, all I see is Blue

When I look down, all I wanna see is You

I've been waiting for the winds to Change

I've been waiting for it all to Rearrange

But maybe it's time that I make a Move

Maybe it's time that I really find my Groove

I said, maybe it's God damn time I make a Move

And maybe it's finally time I really find my Groove

Make the Move

Find the Groove

Yeah, Yeah, Yeah - I better make my Move

Yeah, Yeah, Yeah - do ya wanna do it Too

Make the Move

Find the Groove

Yeah, Yeah, Yeah - I better make my Move

Yeah, Yeah, Yeah - do ya wanna do it Too

That's Right, that's Right - it is now our Turn

That's Right, that's Right - it is time to make it Burn

That's Right, that's Right - it is time to use what we've Learned

Make the Move

Find the Groove

Yeah, Yeah, Yeah - I better make my Move

Yeah, Yeah, Yeah - do ya wanna do it Too

That's Right, that's Right - it is now our Turn

That's Right, that's Right - it is time to make it Burn

That's Right, that's Right - it is time to use what we've Learned

Reviews

[John Cardwell]

Great structure- I can feel the song building and building. Will lend itself well to gradually adding instrumentation in the arrangement. Great rhythm in the words. I could feel the beat as I read through it the very first time. The last syllables on each line are great for singers to hold and play with. There's a lot of words so I'm thinking up tempo. And versatile musically - I can hear it as an acoustic funk shuffle, a country backbeat, ska. Nice work!

[Healing Star]

Hey Junk, thank you so much for the encouraging review. I really do appreciate it. I have learned over the last year that if I have a good song playing or playing in my head that the words will flow with a lot more rhythm. thanks again.