In The Morning

This is about my creation process. It is in the morning for me, I think because we are still connected to our subconscious, also late into the night sometimes works for me.

In the Morning you hear the song bird Singing

You hear the song bird, what's he saying To You

To You

Yes in the Morning, before the sounds rise Up

Can you hear the spirits? they are calling To You

To You

 

Oh in the Morning, when the skies are quiet and Still

There are blessings to be found, between each Heart Beat

Heart Beat

In the early Morning, when all is still Asleep

You can find yourself, catch You, in the middle of a Heart Beat

Heart Beat

 

You see the early Morning, it's the time set aside for You

It's a time for seeing visions, and hearing The Truth

The Truth

Wake with the thought in your head, just getting out of Bed

It's when you are close to the real You and The Truth

The Truth

 

You find yourself searching at the beginning of each Day

You feel the higher, and say come and walk With Me

With Me

Your thoughts are running wild as you start Out

You hear the higher and say come and talk With Me

With Me

 

Then it all comes together just at the break of Day

And you write it down and read what he has To Say

To Say

Your heart is filled with tears as the words meet your Ears

You feel the love and meaning in what he has To Say

To Say

 

In the early morning your heart is at Peace

Before mistakes and worries have a chance To Steal

To Steal

Oh that early morning I wish it could always Be

Before all the rushing has a chance your heart To Steal

To Steal

 

Blessed is the Morning, Blessed is the Day

Don't you waste another moment, Don't let it Get Away

Get Away

Oh that early Morning, just before the Dawn

Be happy in the moment, trust it will not Get Away

Get Away

 

Never forget the Morning, it will always be there for You

Your inner self is always ready, just waiting for The Nod

The Nod

The wonderful peace of the Morning stairs right back at You

The higher self can do nothing alone, he needs to see The Nod

The Nod

 

It only takes a moment, one tiny little Spark

This will open all to You, it will clear out all The Dark

The Dark

Now that it has happened for you, it is time to share It

Others need to find it too, they are there in The Dark

The Dark

 

Oh how wonderful the Morning, when it is you and other Thousands

They are all ready, to find it in Their Hearts

Their Hearts

Know that it is in your Heart to share, and not for you to Choose

All you need is light the spark, the fuel is there in Their Hearts

Their Hearts

 

Continue to believe in the Morning, do not miss a single One

The answers will be there, waiting just For You

For You

The Holy Blessed Morning, when all glory is with the Sun

Take all you have been given, given just For You

For You

   

In this Holy Morning, recharge to stay the Coarse

It is time to go and find them, go help them find Their Way

Their Way

In the early Morning, there is nothing to keep you From

Working for the ones who, may be lost along Their Way

Their Way 

 

Oh Yes, In the early Morning, you will find the Courage

To rise up and conquer, all that's keeping you from who You Are

You Are

You are the Light, the Holy One, Love shines down on You

Now walk in the divine, and know just who You Are

You Are

 

That Glorious Holy Morning, when all life is at its Best

Take the charge to go out, and give it all You Have

You Have

It is now, It is Now, don't lose what you have Begun

You must find those who need it, that gift that You Have

You Have

 

The Morning the Holy Morning, it comes down with the Dew

You have seen it, I know you've seen it, it is With You

With You

Take it now my Children, share it with all who Will

You have it in your Heart, that special gift With You

With You

Reviews

[Icelanna]

I love the repetition in this, it emphasizes it perfectly. The only notes I have is in the first stanza.
Firstly you use "song" when you introduce the bird, in the next line you use "saying". If he's singing then he's not talking, if you catch my drift, I would use "singing".
Secondly there is a question in the last but one line. "can you..." there should be a question mark there because its an interrogative, you need the symbol there.
Thirdly, in the 11th stanza I don't think the "a" is needed. "don't miss a one" It doesn't make much sense, I would take it out.
Other than that...! I love it :)
Hope this helps x
Love to you x

[Healing Star]

Thank you for your kind words, also thank you for your help in making it better. I will make the changes you suggest. thanks again.

[Icelanna]

Your welcome x

Mostly the early morning thoughts, dreams or experiences are the ones who we see so vividly. It could be half-unconcious, but also still unconcious, in our REM-sleep. It is so interesting to read your experiences with, and thoughts about this subject.

Mostly when I had a dream like that, on early mornings, I take it so with me the rest of the day, and I can build on that positive vibe, for a long time, this was wonderful to read, thank you.

- Elisa

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Very nice poem! It reminds me a little of one I read yesterday. I think the echo of lines here help get the mean across. Writing itself is an echo, so I think very well done to you!

[Healing Star]

thank you, I am glad you liked it. Hope it helps you in your creation.

[sithlordjp]

The repetitions are very effective, they provide a heartbeat for the whole piece, excellent writing!

[Healing Star]

thank you for your positive feedback. hope it helps you in your creation.

[sithlordjp]

It sure will! :)