Untitled #63

Untitled #63

A Poem by geraldrice76

 

I beat my brain.

It didn’t listen.

It makes a nasty habit of that.

So I took it out with a bullet.

Funny thing is…

After, I couldn’t finish this po—

© 2008 geraldrice76


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I couldn't give a review because I was kinda at a lost for words. It was smart and witty yet those words would be a bit of a understatement. A dark humor. Well played.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clever to the point of almost being too clever, but a good laugh and nicely understated, if blowing your brain (singular) out can be described as understated.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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