You

You

A Poem by GeraldFIngBurke
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Short and simple

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You
are the one I feel
Only time
Eyes of glass

How many years I'd wait
Bite my tongue
It misses me

Lie to me unto myself
Silently damn you to hell


© 2015 GeraldFIngBurke


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GeraldFIngBurke
If it seems the resolution is missing, it's because there isn't one.

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Hi Gerald - (I want to apologise beforehand for being so random on this)

I did get the 'suspended chord' feel of this G.
I was also minded of the quote (paraphrasing here)"What kind of person makes up a lie then convinces themselves that it's the truth".

No resolution ....hmmm very clever my talented friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GeraldFIngBurke

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the read, I'm glad you liked it.



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Hi Gerald - (I want to apologise beforehand for being so random on this)

I did get the 'suspended chord' feel of this G.
I was also minded of the quote (paraphrasing here)"What kind of person makes up a lie then convinces themselves that it's the truth".

No resolution ....hmmm very clever my talented friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GeraldFIngBurke

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the read, I'm glad you liked it.
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ugh... this is sad... but beautifully written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GeraldFIngBurke

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
Short, sweet and direct. Nothing ambiguous. Excellent...:)..........

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GeraldFIngBurke

10 Years Ago

Thank you. This one is more personal than most of my other stuff.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)......

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Added on January 27, 2015
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