Positivity

You ask me if I am Ok
I feel like I have gone astray

You ask me if there is something wrong
I feel like I don't belong

And through the questions
You throw at me
You get nothing but positivity

You ask me if I still feel fine
I feel like you're no longer mine

You ask me if I needed something
With you, I feel like am nothing

But through the questions
You throw at me
You get nothing but positivity

With happy songs I love to play
They'll never know that I'm not Ok

For its important that I looked fine
And all my struggles will just be mine

Yet through the questions
They'll throw at me
They'll get nothing but positivity

Author's Note

Open for constructive criticisms

Reviews

[Mwarari]

I like your style, no rule followed. Your poem kind of resonates with my persona. We try to be okay when we mostly cannot afford to be. Because, we are people's support systems. If we go down, a whole generation goes down with us

[Jorj Jie]

Thank you. ❤️ It is what it is.