He Said - She Said

He Said - She Said

A Poem by Jorj Jie
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Boy meets Girl

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Excuse me Miss, what time is it?!
He asked and stood by my side.
It's time for you to get a watch.
I said, with a smile so wide.

He said:I left mine at home.
I was in a hurry.

She said: We can take a quick roam
It is still so early.

Seriously,What time is it?
I think I'm late, I can feel the heat.

No, you're not. Just wait for the bell.
Let's get some coffee, my treat!


He said: Fine, let's go. 
Since Miss Coffee is so proactive!

She said: No, I'm not!
I just find your infatuation,so attractive. 

© 2013 Jorj Jie


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Pax
Clever take on the boy meets girl scenario ~ well alot of thing can happen in a jiffy ;)
Very nice story!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Jorj Jie

11 Years Ago

Thank you Pax!
This is a fun "script" in poetic form. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorj Jie

11 Years Ago

sorry, I have no idea where to put it in.... like category or something :)
thanks for the rev.. read more

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Added on April 29, 2013
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Tags: teen stuff

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Jorj Jie
Jorj Jie

Manila, NCR, Philippines



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