Past Present Future

Past Present Future

A Poem by Jorj Jie
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The Past

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The Past...

It's something that I used to hate.
It deprived me of so many things.
The Perfect Love
The Perfect Life
The Perfect wedding...

The Present...

It came with a twist of fate.
It offered me some things.
almost perfect Love
almost perfect perfect Life
almost perfect wedding

The Future...

It will find me my soul mate
It will offer better things
I will fall in love
I will embrace Life
I'll have that much-awaited wedding.

© 2013 Jorj Jie


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Good theme in this wordplay on the past, present and the future. I have not had a great past, I suppose not many of us do. The present is good. I found that I could forgive myself of my wrongs. That is important because it gives me peace of mind. I have not much future, I'm an "aged" guy. But you seem to have a future and one that you are very optimistic about. That is the key. Keep that optimism, put a smile on your face and in your heart and you will have that wedding. I expect to read about it in one of your poems.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorj Jie

11 Years Ago

Thank You, Sir! :) looking forward to it too :)



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fantastic poem which is heart touching

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorj Jie

11 Years Ago

thank you!
I like this and how you have it all worked together.
Simply wonderful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorj Jie

11 Years Ago

thank you!
Good theme in this wordplay on the past, present and the future. I have not had a great past, I suppose not many of us do. The present is good. I found that I could forgive myself of my wrongs. That is important because it gives me peace of mind. I have not much future, I'm an "aged" guy. But you seem to have a future and one that you are very optimistic about. That is the key. Keep that optimism, put a smile on your face and in your heart and you will have that wedding. I expect to read about it in one of your poems.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorj Jie

11 Years Ago

Thank You, Sir! :) looking forward to it too :)

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Jorj Jie
Jorj Jie

Manila, NCR, Philippines



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