Observations #1

Observations #1

A Story by Geoffrey Savage

Warm morning, birds chirping and flying with the slight breeze up hill. A glimps of the sun shines bright through a tiny opening in the clouded gray sky. Close by an elderly couple out for a stroll, stops to takes a rest on the rockside further down the hill. Kids waiting at the curb, all teasing, pushing, imaginating while they wait for their big yellow ride. Early morning biker swoops past with no time to spare, he's on his way to make his day.

© 2012 Geoffrey Savage


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You have penned this wonderfully and with a great essence of wisdom. I

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely, detailed observation, Geoffrey. Wish it were warm here, the sun is shining though.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on April 24, 2012
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Tags: morning, birds, couple, children, bus, curb

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Geoffrey Savage
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