Poetic Imagination

a bit silly and sensual too

His words spilled out upon the page

Like kisses upon the nape of her neck

Tasting imagination upon his tongue

Creative writing is more than fun

Author's Note

sensual,fun,poetry, sexy, silly,

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the first three lines...and for me, that could be the poem....perfect metaphor there.

j.

[gentlekindness]

I think you're right !
I just read it out loud the way you said..and I liked it.
I'll post an edited version.
Thank you :)

[Nigel Newman]

I tend to agree. And you could call it 'The writer and the muse'.

[Alice Poésy]

I like to say that poetry and writing is a seduction. This rests my case.

Vivid, descriptive and needless to say: in love with the comparison.

[A hare off]

Yes it is especially when we find beautiful and fun little poems like this one.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Love it! Writing can be a bit of a thrill.

[gentlekindness]

Thank you. I am glad it made you smile. 💕👭

[Mister T.]

Indeed, you're absolutely right.
Writing is more than just a bunch of sentences on a page. Writing involves emotions, imagination and hard work. Writing is by and for anyone and everyone. Who-ever works hard is sure to have succes.
Great message in very few lines. Good job :)

[gentlekindness]

So nice of you to stop by. Always nice to have you visit and comment.
Thank you💕💙

[gentlekindness]

Beautiful review. I love reading reviews from true poets because their words are like reading a painting. Poets write even regular messages and emails differently from other people. ...artistically...
Always nice to have you visit,
Annie💕👭👭💕

[Bear]

Bravo! Writing is a romance art, words only have to power we give them and good writers can move hearts bend wills and motivate minds, that is power :~)

[SleeplessVolcano]

I know you probably tried to be light-hearted with this, but it feels as if the last line does not match the passion of the first three lines.......

Adding a last line in a similar vein than the first three may, umm.....provide a more substantial climax than humor? :)

[gentlekindness]

I will post some more sensual poetry in the future if you like. Yes you are right, this one was just designed to elicit a smile. I find playfulness to have its place in romance and sensuality, if it the right timing and when the other person is in the mood.

This was originally just some email banter with a poet friend of mine that started it, and was enjoying my return responses. He told me to try posting this particular email because he thought people would enjoy it.

Some people did and others did not. It is the same for all art amd music. I write songs and sing them. Most like them but some do not. It is always the way, because people have different personalities...different things make them smile.
💕💙💙💕

[Mary Helda]

this is indeed a sensual ,soft and beautiful piece

[gentlekindness]

Thank you so much. I am very happy you liked it. I will come over and see some of your writing tomorrow.
Blessings,
Annie

[Mary Helda]

you are welcome:-)

[PhoenixDown]

Boom! Makes me smile. Treat yourself more often to fun, or at least fun writing. You wear it well!

[gentlekindness]

Thank you. Glad this one made you smile :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Naughty but nice. Your four little lines send the imagination darting like swallows in flight.

[gentlekindness]

I am glad you liked it. Thank you for your lovely comment 💙