A Love With One Side

It is a poem about having loved someone deeply without the other person knowing it.

     A Love with One Side

Looking at you from a distance                                    

Without you knowing the glance

I have secretly throwing at you

Was a day task you don’t know.

Doing it is something I like best!

 

Once you look at my direction

I thought ‘twas only an imagination

But feeling your tap on my shoulder

And says “Your turn to ride the taxi”.

Was the greatest moment of my life!

 

My closest friends often tell me

That mine is a terminal disease

One sided love affair they call it

Oh, it might be a joke to some

But to me it keeps my heart exist!

 

Author's Note

I would be truly happy to hear an honest opinion!

Reviews

[annabellee]

Hi there, I really liked your poem, I can totally relate, I've been going through the same thing, and trust me your friends are right it will stop eventually.

[gentlebreeze13]

Hi annabelle, i am happy to know that you were able to relate on my poem. hey it'd my second day today here @ writers cafe and i want to read others but i dunno where to go. can u give me instruction? Once again thanks!

[annabellee]

Just go to writings at the top, or you can also go to writers and check their works out, I'm pretty new myself, but I hoped that helped. And you're most welcome :)

[gentlebreeze13]

thanks a lot for those who viewed this poem...i just hope you left me some comments for me to learn about writing.