Emotional Disruption

 

Emotional Disruption

The creaking rusted hinges give way
the minds door reluctantly opens to the past
A room of the hurts from yesterday
soulful memories that always last
The aching throb of unseen scars
bleed slowly within the mind
Locked demons behind their bars
escape from the openings they do find
Stirred disruptions play within the soul
erosion of an empty heart
The objective to destroy the whole
piece by piece and part by part
gkl

Reviews

[Michael X]

this is classic in rhyme form and in a selecting way of word choice and imagery, particularly the flow .
excellent job

[MagiCrystal]

Last night I surf this blog I find you.. and I knew you had mystery and power..also.. your piece talks to me... every word you wrote has passion, love, hate, power....you are an amazing poet..!

Stirred disruptions play within the soul
erosion of an empty heart
The objective to destroy the whole
piece by piece and part by part
gkl that show me a lot about you nice to met you.. and welcome to my blog.. Magic

[Katherine Wyatt]

What a magnificent piece..the last four lines are phenomenal...
Sigh. I know this place
Wonderful write!