Im Sorry

The awaking hours at night,

I cant do this anymore I feel tight.

Looking at you I can see the pain,

Just seeing it makes me insain.

So I write this poem to tell you im sorry for this,

I know im just a miss.

Life will be a lot eaiser now,

I know it will be it's like wow.

Im sorry for this I truly am,

Its time for me to see mommy and Pam.

Theres nothing to live for anymore I do love you,

Dont ever forget thats dont blame yourself its me not you.

Dont worrie mommy wil take care of me,

This is what is sposed to be.

Tell Kirsten I love her, tell Cody Aunt Ashleigh loves him,

Tell Joey thats he is always my number one.

Daddy im sorry for this please dont forget me,

Just wait I promous you'll see.

 

Reviews

[E-man]

wow the beginning was great but you lost all rhythm to the poem toward the middle it was just flowing so nicely but i guess its good you didn't sacrifice meaning for the sake of rhyme (oh yeah i don't know if you tried to rhyme pam and am cause they don't rhyme)
oh i LOVED how you rhymed pain with insane in the 3-4 lines that was really powerful over all you did a pretty good job =D