When I'm Gone

knock knockin on heaven's door

When I die and look back, I’ll see myself….

Standing alone

Waiting for someone

Running after something

Chasing my dreams

Stumbling and falling

No one to pick me up

 

 

 

But when I’ll die, I’ll be the happiest

 

Coz I’ll be going to my best friend

I’ll be sitting next to Him

The one who died for me!

With no regrets…

With no sadness…

With only peace in my heart I’ll be there!

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[jaybeth]

Now poet, you wanna make me cry

[W.Piggy]

beautiful piece :]
simple but really great, full of meaning.

great job :)



w.piggy

[laceyjane23]

This is a very beautiful piece, full of emotion. Great job!
Laceyjane

[Vaishali..^_^]

this was beautiful yet sad..!
great write..!

[BluesForTheRisingSun]

A short but meaningful poem, reflective.
Excellent write!