FOUR ROSES

FOUR ROSES

A Poem by ETERNITY
"

anda one anda two...

"
He taught me how to take Four Roses,
"Roll it over your tongue," says he,
"Really taste it, peel back the layers."
I drink it slow, thinking 'bout him and me...
Finished the bottle, feeling like Chinaski.
Feeling like rolling him over my tongue instead.
The way he says "Caramel" just does me.
I'll never get him out of my head.
"Roll it on your tongue, eyes closed, swallow slow...
Count all the layers...Caramel is my favorite."
I'm in love. 
Help.
Kill me dead.
I love him,
This Man.
This Awesome Poet.

© 2025 ETERNITY


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Eternity,
The very best life has to offer is shared sensuality... If we could only forget all "The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune," stayed in our soft nests, and lived creatively, it would be like getting past the angels and their flaming swords to rediscover Eden.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ETERNITY

1 Day Ago

That's beautiful, Vol.
I truly enjoyed the Four Roses. Thanks for the extra hint. It was so l.. read more



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Eternity,
The very best life has to offer is shared sensuality... If we could only forget all "The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune," stayed in our soft nests, and lived creatively, it would be like getting past the angels and their flaming swords to rediscover Eden.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ETERNITY

1 Day Ago

That's beautiful, Vol.
I truly enjoyed the Four Roses. Thanks for the extra hint. It was so l.. read more
"anda three, anda four,"
I always have to say "caramel" with a Scottish accent...
Great poem, awesome poetry!

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ETERNITY

1 Day Ago

Michelle Buckley, Much thanks!

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