RAVE

RAVE

A Poem by ETERNITY
"

the way it was

"
I was never the raving beauty
My sister was
She always had the guys just by
Batting her eyes or because.
.
My requite came in spite of it
Maybe because of my twit
Or fighting it, the draw I felt
Or the scent the dogs smelt
.
A daily battle, prolonged war
It was never what I longed for
The dick, the prick, always too quick
Never thick enough but lots to make me sick.

© 2025 ETERNITY


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Forever,
True Grit. I admire the strength of any woman who can put aside all the petty whining and moaning because life is not perfect, who tells the truth with words for bricks instead of pillows. Pretty isn't enough to accomplish anything, but beauty that comes from bone marrow, tendons and guts always says something important. Another great one!
Vol


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ETERNITY

14 Hours Ago

VOLCANO, I'm posting her picture so try to refrain from erupting
Vol

11 Hours Ago

No refraining necessary, madam, and the eruption of verbal response or any other kind is in acceptab.. read more
ETERNITY

11 Hours Ago

@Vol ...of course. The proportion in comparison to the stimulus is exactly what I expect thereby my .. read more



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Forever,
True Grit. I admire the strength of any woman who can put aside all the petty whining and moaning because life is not perfect, who tells the truth with words for bricks instead of pillows. Pretty isn't enough to accomplish anything, but beauty that comes from bone marrow, tendons and guts always says something important. Another great one!
Vol


Posted 14 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ETERNITY

14 Hours Ago

VOLCANO, I'm posting her picture so try to refrain from erupting
Vol

11 Hours Ago

No refraining necessary, madam, and the eruption of verbal response or any other kind is in acceptab.. read more
ETERNITY

11 Hours Ago

@Vol ...of course. The proportion in comparison to the stimulus is exactly what I expect thereby my .. read more

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Added on March 20, 2025
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ETERNITY

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