ERRATUM

I MADE SOME MISTAKES

My heart is screaming for you

But you blocked me

You blocked me

You blocked me

x

My heart has been reaching

For you

But your mind is set.

Your heart is hard.

x

Now let me slip back

Into Oblivion

Where I was happy

Before I saw you.

~x~

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this was a hard read, but very effective. i have never been blocked but ghosted plenty of times. to have one's connection lost with someone who meant a lot to you. there's no recovering from that. and how i long to be in that place where i was happy before i saw her. maybe i was incomplete, but there was still the radiance of hope.
anyway, i liked this. it resonated with me and the words flowed. it was a bittersweet experience reading this.

[Eternity]

Ern, you said "there was still the radiance of hope." Still?

[Neville]

If you can learn from them, you haven't done any real harm .. but can move forward and look forward to making new ones .. Seasons best to you & yours .. Neville

[Eternity]

It's a bit difficult to dismiss so many years...But I should listen to your wisdom, Neville. Thanks and a Blessed holiday to you and yours as well.