Rupture

rupture,

pH paper reading positive,

flowing at a slow trickle
like groundwater over stones,

viability reached
yet the danger remains,

the chalice of light
reminds him that love
remains despite the
outcome of an
indifferent universe,

whenever a stitch ruptures,

whenever a heart ruptures,

whenever a dam ruptures,

the positivity remains despite
the battery standing on its head,

and as these abnormally warm days
keep occurring and remaining
in our memories,

let us realize and
let him realize that
is the rupture we need,

a rupture of love
upon the world,

and them especially

Reviews

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

The chalice of light stanza is very pretty, I like this kinds of arguments.

[roarke]

rupture, rapture, what's the difference between a little vowel?

Sometimes certain messages can only be expressed in the rarefied air of artistic creation, not all will get it, only those that are supposed to.

well put.

[Ed Hart]

i don't know the the universe is so much 'indifferent' as it is about its own business...i sure like the way you pull in the big ideas

To finish whit: " YES INDEED" led him realize that.

This is such a great piece! Love the PH paper reading positive, it means, a nuclear whole being, well duh... almost. Chemical seen... brilliant nerd factors here :D:D:D