Tightly So

The present is wrapped,

tightly so, awaiting the

correct day to be

brought before the world at large,

a real success, truly so.

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

You are spitting out riddles.. Clever so clever... I can wait to solve.
You sure do come back with a bang!

[Dreamer]

hmmm when I read the word present I think about time. I feel as if what could be said here is that the mystries of today/right now, the lessons learnt, the reason for the pain we may be enduring or the joy we are enjoying is a present (in the sense of a gift). On that will be opened on the day that we truely need to revelation. In the day that we will grow, understand, accept. I may be incorrect bt I love the ability of this being a pun. I enjoyed this. Great job

[WhiteWillow]

This is a wonderful piece. I picture a nice, little present in wrapping paper and bows, awaiting the correct holiday to be opened, and at the same time, what the future, at large, will hold. A beautifu,l thought-provoking write.