Crash, Crash, Crash

Crash, crash, crash,
can't establish any connection!

Like a bad first date,
only over and over again.

I'm f*****g addicted to you
when I go to your address,
yet I'm blocked because
you're never there.

You're a fickle mistress
when the electron flow fails.

Author's Note

My love/hate letter to WC.

Reviews

[Chris Taylor]

Yeah, I am quite "put out" when the computer goes awry as well. Good poem expressing the feeling of annoyance when the gadget fails. I liked this piece.

[Kenneth The Poet]

I agree wholly. Thanks for the review.

[Chris Taylor]

It is my pleasure to do so.

[realmwriter]

f****n computers , nothin more than a paper wait when the power goes out

[Robin]

key word - addicted

[M.Babu]

Haha...i like this...

Had that cool badass tinge to it...

Enjoyable...
~M.Babu~

[emma]

i liked it! cool flow, and i can relate completely.

[LeeLee Ryder]

CCC is very relate-able ... I've lost so many writs & reviews of people that I'm
copying them b4 WC tosses me into a vast blank verse toilet idiom ...
Loved the last line & the 1st date reference ... Good job, TOG!
LLR

[Coyote Poetry]

I know the feeling. At the end of each month. The repair and upkeep of site is worked on. Leave me to wander to other places. I like the last lines to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Teri B]

*smiles @ you* This is how I feel when Multiply "updates" its site! I haven't become quite as addicted to WC as yet...

[Audrey Howitt]

Ah yes--we can all relate I think!

[Nobody.]

:) yeah! like.....TODAY! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!

WC hates my slimy guts. lol!