Lucas Wave

Hidden
In
The Open
It Is There For
Eyes That Can See, Minds That Know
Ears That Are Extended To Hear That High Pitch
This Bloodhound Is In Tune With The Hidden Forces That Guide The Universe
So Much So That This Creature Analyzes
Every Speck That Can Be
Sighted Or Heard
Tasted or
Touch'd
Senses
Guide Us
On
The Path To
Mental Greatness
And Maybe That Great Leap Up
Upward And Outward, A Chromosonal Jump
An Evolutionary Lift Onto A Higher Plane Of Existence
We Are The Capable Ones, Able To Kill
Off The Cain That Lives Within
Ourselves, The Shells
Breed Away
The
Toxic

Reviews

[...]

. ah, absolutely brilliant ... what a spectacular looking intensely meaningful post ... very skilled ... very sensitive ... this ode to "mental greatness" ... is just so inspiring ...

[Joiedevivre]

much to say after this read. In the first half I sense the belonging in a an arguably arbitrary group of people that do understand what is there in you, visible but detectable only by that 'breed' that are sensitive to the frequencies that you emit. This breed may then be the one that develops a greater consciousness beyond the 'i' to the next stage of human evolution. So tangible the intangible you make, and make us all protrude those sensitive antennae.

[....]

quite the interesting write and read. Like it very powerful....xo

[Ryzo]

interesting write. the story behind the words is interesting. perhaps we will become smarter, and more capable. As the years pass technology is only getting better and more advanced and intricate than ever before. Ultamitley we are the most deadliest animals on the planet. So, "We are the capable ones, able to kill." one thing is for certain, the more we all f**k the more we will indeed "Breed away the toxic" Great read man, keep em coming. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is powerful and I like the story in the words. So many strong points made in this poem.
"We Are The Capable Ones, Able To Kill
Off The Cain That Lives Within"
Man need blood to survive. I don't know. Have we got worst since Cain? Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sleepless]

nice like the whole structure of the poem 1:)

[Muse]

This is cool, your word play in this poem is appreciated and adds a unique perception. The message is hardcore reality for some. I like the rawness and the emotion I felt reading when reading this.

[NightShade]

You have just peeled my wig back, popped my cranial cap and lavished something wonderful on my pineal gland!

[Hello, Goodbye]

potent write my friend.. filled with splendid imagery and expressive imaginings..