Forensic Mind

The forensic mind
invasively explores the
bleeding heart and
only finds tissue damage,
but intuition already knew
the metaphysical state
of things, bodily stress
caused by a broken heart
leads to a truly broken heart,
and a memorial stain that
can't be bleached out at all.

Reviews

[Teri B]

If only we knew how the intangibles of our lives, like stress, can break the tangibles. Too often our ignorance is fatal. Another great piece!

[NightShade]

The connection between mind and body are well known, even if we don't fully understand the details yet. It leads one to wonder if emotional placebos are not the worst thing in the world. Little white lies seem acceptable in this society and I wonder... Well, I guess perception IS reality! Then again, when we cease to believe in anything, whatever is left really is reality...

I should have been a faith healer... folks don't have to believe I am. well, 12 would be enough to start...

Anyway, this is an excellent piece, masterfully written and exposes a truth we intuit and no one is surprised to find the science behind it.

[...]

. absolutely brilliant ... poignant in a very under stated and subtle way ... and i know that "memorial stain" truly well ... also, i find that you have a unique way of incorporating scientific concepts ... and that too a variety of them ...

[S.Hunt]

a challenge well met

[Ms. Gruye]

To me, this piece spoke to the introspective. You've outlined that very well. Again, you landed it perfectly with your last lines.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Great writing. I can only think of restoration, as my heart healed, 'cause I was finally unafraid to let love in. I like your style, Ken.

[....]

This is well done & said.

[Muse]

This is very unique. Fresh with feeling and creative analogies.

and a memorial stain that
can't be bleached out at all.

Stains may fade, but they never really disappear.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

most definitely! Well penned