Ken you work is meaningful, we need more poets like you, you summon truths that need to be seen, I know your religious makeup, but I have to say someone is shining on you...
This really calls attention to the problems that Native Americans are facing. I know a lady who struggles with these same issues. I loved the way that you described the dark history of our country and the native people who were here first..."blackening out the parts that are already dark." Brilliant line.
Ira Hayes is remember thanks to Johnny Cash. I heard his name and did some research in his song by J.Cash. His life came alive in the movie the "Flags of our fathers." I watch my Ojibwa /Mexican father drink himself to death. Some Native Americans felt peace in war and drinking only. Hard for many to face life in the old days. Last people given the right to speak their language and do their Native dances were the American Native Americans. Ira Hayes died a bad death alone. But I believe his Marine comrade are with him. No peace on earth for poor Ira Hayes. I hope he find peace in death. A excellent poem. World is still hard for the Native Americans. Many tribes have little and the Government is always trying to give less. Thank you for the powerful poem.
Coyote
Admiration for beginning and ended with the same character and his only appearence was in those two lines. The entire transition in between was applicable to: past and present, different individuals who part of the same group and the painful causes and effects tied to redemptive solutions. Well done. Good work here.
Kenneth The Poet is an optimist wrapped in the candy shell of moroseness and cynicism. He lives between the two parallels marked 46 and 49, all while living in the state marked 39. He pretends that he.. more..