Twice Nine

Twice Nine

A Chapter by Kenneth The Poet

the child can die for God
and country at twice nine
and can vote for leader
of the free world as well,

but to get a free knife
for cooking, twice nine is too young


© 2012 Kenneth The Poet


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shows the irony of what and 18 year old can and can't do, which doesn't make sense...you could be 18 to kill people at war but you can't buy a pack of cigarettes til you're seven times three.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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age limit sucks at times....but it has some positives sides too...
nice...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

12 Years Ago

I know, there are some reasons for it.
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~ 18 is too young for many things...
~ i find my nephew 9-year-old-like when he's actually 15...
~ and, i'm not even an over-protective parent or anything...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

12 Years Ago

It's an inconsistent set of thoughts and standards that I am commenting on here. I have to agree wit.. read more
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12 Years Ago

~ you're right... i don't dare to say it... but i find many things wrong in the world around me... .. read more
age limits. lol!

yes. they make no sense

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

12 Years Ago

I must agree.
there was a time when 'leaders' led the way to the fray, now they just send the hardened children 'over there'

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

12 Years Ago

Very true as well.
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TLK
When was I a man? Was it when I was tall enough to see over your lies? Was I a child just because I was stupid enough to believe you?

It depends on whether conformity or individuality is prized. And as we know from bitter experience, neither is enough -- both is still not enough -- to make ourselves and others happy.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

12 Years Ago

Thanks for that.
Poignant, and democratical the same time...
Wich i like.

Yes, she may touch it when she's 18 :D
Well said.... ;) daddy

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

12 Years Ago

Definitely. Thank you for the review. It's good of you to say that.

12 Years Ago

MY SWEET granny always said, when she was still alive, children, under the six lol don't may play wi.. read more
Kenneth The Poet

12 Years Ago

No problem at all.

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