Chicken Sandwiches

chicken sandwiches
are more important to folks
than the rights of man,
so bad is anything from
any liberal viewpoint

Reviews

[Chris]

5 - 7 - 5 - 7 - 7 or is it 5 - 7 - 5 (white space) 7 - 7 ?

line 3 was flawed but you fixed it awesomely... does my view make me a Cathy espouser or detractor?

It sure seems to be a lot of "noise" being raised over a single person's - personally professed and held - religious view. Silly me ...but wasn't it just last week that a Baptist Pastor wouldn't marry a black couple in his church - even though they attended services there. Even though they had made accepted arrangements well before hand. He had no qualms performing the ceremony - marrying them - in another church, just not in his. I imagine their monetary offerings were well accepted weekly. Where is the furor? Oh, but they weren't the same sex - was it that then that made the ultimate difference?

Chris

[Kenneth The Poet]

No, just perceptive and concerned. Thanks for catching that, I made a change without really affecting the message at all. I agree with you said overall in the review. Thanks for taking the time to stop by.

[Chris]

Does a Tanka's form have white space or does it matter?

[Kenneth The Poet]

That doesn't matter I don't think.

[Chris]

Cool, thanks Ken

[Ed Hart]

back before we left the caves many of us ate human sandwiches (the chickens being harder to catch) which were somewhat tasty and helped with population control

[Kenneth The Poet]

Thanks a bunch, Ed.