Diamond

Diamond

A Poem by Kenneth The Poet

springing backward,
a miniature gymnast
in training, yet she
has the gold medal of
her parent's hearts,
laying prone like a
sniper in waiting,
moving her neck
without any sense
of direction or
purpose right now,
yet the potential is
there waiting in the
wings until it is ready,
and the cuteness factor
remains for the duration,
she's the diamond of
their eyes

© 2012 Kenneth The Poet


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Lovely work.

I am confused about "metal" of fourth line.
Would you check?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

12 Years Ago

misspelling of medal. thanks for the review.
zainul

12 Years Ago

I thought like that.
Thanks for fixing.
the facets of symbolism is what makes this gem shine , nice !

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

12 Years Ago

Thanks, Robin.

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Kenneth The Poet
Kenneth The Poet

Bismarck, ND



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