Stupid Limerick #1

Stupid Limerick #1

A Poem by gcp
"

Just a little limerick - for fun

"
I once had a wonderful dream

of a girl who was a little obscene

she took off her clothes

and then touched her toes

and so I ran away with her jeans

© 2013 gcp


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gcp
Just poking about... not much for review...

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so the jeans symbolize copycatting "obscene"? idolizing?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Karl Woof Junior

11 Years Ago

you must hate yourself then, word of advice, let your abilities limit your narcissism cause taunting.. read more
gcp

11 Years Ago

You are very sweet, did anyone ever tell you that?
Karl Woof Junior

11 Years Ago

nope
Sooooo.... your dream.....so you are the one that ran off with your own jeans ? :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


KurKota

11 Years Ago

:) no....it must have just been too damn early in my morning, and I probably should have waited unt.. read more
gcp

11 Years Ago

Coffee first - typing second - now there's a general rule of thumb I can get behind ;)
KurKota

11 Years Ago

Lol.... I knew you were a thinking woman !!!
Really good idea, but doesn't quite scan. Would work better like this:
"I once had a wonderful dream:
this girl was a little obscene
she took off her clothes
and then tuched her toes
so I ran away with her jeans


Posted 11 Years Ago


gcp

11 Years Ago

Yah - the original does have ghost beat issues, doesn't it? Nice edit. As in your fiction, your econ.. read more
did u burn the jeans? or make a bag outta it?
lol
that was very funny and cute
thx

Posted 11 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

oooh i din know about the mirrors....and standin in between...
its like marrying precious pie.. read more
gcp

11 Years Ago

I figure you have to be careful with barbers... they work all day between mirrors....

<.. read more
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

yes someohow i wonder how i can trust a barber with barbed scissors running down my mane and a razor.. read more
Very good, I liked the end result a well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


gcp

11 Years Ago

:) Thanks - when they're limericks the end comes round pretty quick ;)
Relic

11 Years Ago

They do, I have one laying around somewhere but it didn't do very well so I took it off. I might sne.. read more
Ha! I loved the ending.

Posted 11 Years Ago


gcp

11 Years Ago

Aww thanks :) good to have a happy ending... ;)

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Added on March 8, 2013
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Tags: silly, limerick, saucy, fun

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