so the jeans symbolize copycatting "obscene"? idolizing?
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Actually, they were just jeans - but I guess a pair of blue jeans pretty much symbolizes the good o.. read moreActually, they were just jeans - but I guess a pair of blue jeans pretty much symbolizes the good old days when the USA was young and cocky and thought she knew what she was doing... ;)
11 Years Ago
so you dont want my dada tell me what people like im an alien
11 Years Ago
I can't speak for other people, but I like good grammar, correct spelling, and elegant use of langua.. read moreI can't speak for other people, but I like good grammar, correct spelling, and elegant use of language. I guess a lot of people are OK with sloppy grammar and disjointed sentences - but for me they are distraction from the content which spoils even a good poem or story.
you must hate yourself then, word of advice, let your abilities limit your narcissism cause taunting.. read moreyou must hate yourself then, word of advice, let your abilities limit your narcissism cause taunting a beast makes a worse
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You are very sweet, did anyone ever tell you that?
:) no....it must have just been too damn early in my morning, and I probably should have waited unt.. read more:) no....it must have just been too damn early in my morning, and I probably should have waited until after having some coffee to do any reviewing ! lol
11 Years Ago
Coffee first - typing second - now there's a general rule of thumb I can get behind ;)
Really good idea, but doesn't quite scan. Would work better like this:
"I once had a wonderful dream:
this girl was a little obscene
she took off her clothes
and then tuched her toes
so I ran away with her jeans
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Yah - the original does have ghost beat issues, doesn't it? Nice edit. As in your fiction, your econ.. read moreYah - the original does have ghost beat issues, doesn't it? Nice edit. As in your fiction, your economy with words is excellent. Thanks :)
did u burn the jeans? or make a bag outta it?
lol
that was very funny and cute
thx
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
hehe - nah, I wore them - they were cute jeans ;)
11 Years Ago
oh...we have a saying here where i am...
never give your old clothes away to someone...and ne.. read moreoh...we have a saying here where i am...
never give your old clothes away to someone...and never wear anothers old clothers...cause along with clothes you part away with your spirit...
along with thier clothes you dress in their spirit..
just wanted to share...
11 Years Ago
That's an interesting saying - reminds me of the one about mirrors - never stand between two mirrors.. read moreThat's an interesting saying - reminds me of the one about mirrors - never stand between two mirrors - because your reflection carries part of your spirit - and between two mirrors you are reflected to infinity and your spirit becomes too thin
I think if I didn't wear other people's clothes I'd have little to wear - a bad habit I guess...
oooh i din know about the mirrors....and standin in between...
its like marrying precious pie.. read moreoooh i din know about the mirrors....and standin in between...
its like marrying precious piety to awesome sin
..and what do i do when at the barbers for a beard shave?...the durn place is full of mirrors on all walls..does that make you jane?....well lets ask tarzan...but then you are you...and thats so true...
oh u can stitch your own fabric im sure...with moss and seaweed...with roots and dry seed...with bark and creepers...
11 Years Ago
I figure you have to be careful with barbers... they work all day between mirrors....
<.. read moreI figure you have to be careful with barbers... they work all day between mirrors....
I'm not too good at stitching... I figure I'll just have to get new jeans... so long as they're cute it'll be ok.
11 Years Ago
yes someohow i wonder how i can trust a barber with barbed scissors running down my mane and a razor.. read moreyes someohow i wonder how i can trust a barber with barbed scissors running down my mane and a razor above the nape of my neck...but then ..hey...lifes too short to start thinkin away...'
u mustve tried some crosstitch im sure..
oh new is new...cute to be you
:) Thanks - when they're limericks the end comes round pretty quick ;)
11 Years Ago
They do, I have one laying around somewhere but it didn't do very well so I took it off. I might sne.. read moreThey do, I have one laying around somewhere but it didn't do very well so I took it off. I might sneak it back in somewhere. Or maybe not. haha :)
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Rebecca 'Pete' McPhearson is a hobo-gypsy, currently living in the back of a car somewhere in central Europe. She likes to list.. more..