Zone

This very short poem was something I scribbled down after a yoga session. I was looking within for direction and inner wisdom to guide me, and these words describe my exact inner experience.

Inhale into another zone, 

you'll find your never truly alone.

Go deep within your soul, 

and embrace yourself as a whole. 

Feel the breath freely flow, 

Just listen;

and your inner voice will let you know. 

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Wow, very compelling words here! Lovely poem and what does it matter if its short? Short poems are sometimes better since they are able to say so much in so little words. Anyway, it's always nice to be able to dive into ourselves and find an inner peace. We all need some type of release. In the end, we only have ourselves, so it's important that we know how to find and achieve inner peace and happiness instead of having to depend on others for it. This tells quite a bit about the human condition and teaches a good lesson.

[Damara]

oooh a mantra for liberating oneself. Short, sweet and perfect guidance. Elegantly written and words that allow the reader to interact with the poem. I found myself taking a deep breath at the appropriate line in the poem. I can see this as a meme encouraging relaxation. Thanks for sharing it with us.

[MARK JOHN JUNOR]

fluently written, sublime and lovely

[Gianna Contillo]

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate feedback!!!

[Edward Lancheister]

a release of freedom. great written

[Gianna Contillo]

YES!! Thank you so much!! it means a lot!