The Inevitable

struggling with agin

Once upon a time
I was beautifully pleasing to the eye
The realizatoin
Of my youth as a far-away memory
Now the sun forsakes me


The realizatoin
Of my youth as a far-away memory
Now the sun forsakes me
I live in shadows
Hiding from the truth of the lines

I live in shadows
Hiding from the truth of the lines
That tells my story
Systematically counting
Down the days when I'm forgotten

Reviews

[Dionysus Cain]

i think this is very good. the ending was perfect, perfect..... i can relate to the poem very much, i enjoyed the flow and the feel it gave off, while i was reading it. i have read some good one's on here but yours sticks out to me. so i take that as being good.....