Forest Invitation

10 word contest

 

EARTH
LISTEN
READING
BOOK
THINGS
HUMAN
EYES
PEEKED
ETERNAL
REITERATED

 

 

I reiterated the eternal peace that I was feeling to the earth as if it were human.

Listen to the animals scurrying around moving things my eyes couldn’t see.

No book or reading could ever teach me to appreciate nature and life forming around me.

I peered into the mouth of the forest and it invited me in and loved me.

 

Reviews

[Trifolio]

“I peered into the mouth of the forest and it invited me in and loved me.”

Loved this ending!

[Helena]

Oh this was beautiful Chaos! I loved where the ten words took
your muse. Well done!

~ Helena ~

[Tovli]

a great prose-poem--very poignant and passionate. tovli

[NightDream]

I like it so fall feeling. Its perfect for the season, great job!

[angelina neves]

very beautiful!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Succint and expressive of the earth and one's relationship to it; great work, mishy x :S