Waiting for Him.

Some love endures.

She use to come evey day

with flowers and tears to share

As she aged, she couldn't come anymore

and no one would take her there.

 

Now she prays her time will come soon

So she can hold him once again and then

as it should be, her name will be written beside him.

Reviews

[Helena]

Nicely written Debby. Thank you for yet another
lovely submission to my contest "A Chance to Shine"! ~ Helena

[Josh Caccamo]

very sad but very well written as well...reading this i assume that her love died and she would visit him everyday where he was barried...it showed her commitment to him even after he had gone. i love writing that has a determined love like this. my favorite line in this writing is, "her name will be written beside him".
that especially must have been well thought out and was clever used in this to portray her love and commitment to him.

[Christine]

Nicely done. Makes me wish I could drive over and take her to him.

[NightDream]

True love holds us in its grasp for ever. It is an obstical that even death can not with hold. Great and moving piece. Good job!!

[Ebs]

aww. quite a sad poem. A love that was sadly lost but is waiting to be rekindled. good write.

[Nely Amorim]

touching and simple.. yet powerful and what we all hope for, a lasting love... wonderful write. :)