Beyond The Clouds

As clouds above yield dreary days below

While high above the sunlight fills the sky

So just beyond the stormy clouds we fly

To places never seen our spirits go.

 

The brilliance of your love thou doth bestow

It carries passion's pleasures on a sigh

That speaks of secret answers owning why

The love that binds our hearts doth overflow.

 

Gone forever fear of hearts rejected,

For to lose such love would be a wretched curse,

So feel the heavenly rays from clouds reflected,

And drown me in your love, my heart immerse;

Two souls shall touch once more with warmth expected

And evoke the beauty of the universe.

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

This is astonishing love, I am glad I found your work, I love each piece as far as I have journeyed lol Thank you:) This is beautiful!
You cradle a lot of universal wisdom hon
xx

[OT]

this is brilliant!! love the subtle rhyme scheme it just flows in a dreamy cadence! the old language gives it a touch of the ethereal - just great!!!

[E.H. Monroe]

The fine almost camoflauged use of the ol O.E. is a nice touch to something that reads reminiscient of Yeats. The message is enough to get anyone a big fat kiss, smile, or a touch from the beyond.

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. overwhelming ... one of the most beautiful odes to love that i have read in the last two and a half years of reading poetry online ... "and evoke the beauty of the universe" ... is an unforgettable thought in an unforgettable line ... learnt lots from you ...

[cfix]

This is such a lovely write here.
I like your pic as well.