Summer Nights

Sonnet

The warmth of summer nights inside the mind

Lends soothing comfort, lifting humankind...

Replacing days of icy fingered hate

With gentle hands that rehabilitate.

No longer speaking words that so confined

That all who heard were left both deaf and blind

To any chance of learning or to find

Forgiveness for mistakes that isolate.

The warmth of summer nights inside the mind

Affords the opportunity to wind

The fragile strands of love that tightly bind

Our lonely souls together and create

A world in which our seasons celebrate.

Accepting without judging has defined

The warmth of summer nights inside the mind.

 

GKB

Reviews

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"Our lonely souls together and create
A world in which our seasons celebrate."

you wove together many ingeniously existential lines in this-
a very beautiful poem...
""A world in which our seasons celebrate.
Accepting without judging has defined
The warmth of summer nights inside the mind.""
~very beautifully written!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

Affors the opportunity to wing
the fragile strands of love that tightly bind
our lonely souls together and create!


OMG! perfect description of summer love! beautiful and well thought out! love it!

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Beautiful.

[Judy Ponceby]

Just a lovely piece. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing :)

[typingaway]

Outstanding!xx

[Lily Mae]

I love this for the fact of all the emotion and beauty combined.. The warm summer nights healing wounds of the past and celebrating the world in seasons. I just love it from beginning to end... Great write..xx

[Sukriti Suki]

Simply wonderful...this is something that touches the heart straight up.

[Amy Bumpas]

I'm sure most of us are looking for those summer nights of warmth.
You have some really great lines in this:The warmth of summer nights inside the mind
Lends soothing comfort, lifting humankind...
Replacing days of icy fingered hate
With gentle hands that rehabilitate.
The fragile strands of love that tightly bind

Our lonely souls together and create
A world in which our seasons celebrate
keep up the good work:))

[darkness*star1985]

very beautiful, the words flew very smoothly and the picture unfolds. very good work.

[Hayley]

This touched my heart. It is written absolutely beautifully. I love the flow and the words you chose are just incredible and fitting for the mood of this. Wonderful!

[Sunni Davis]

Beautiful imagery and peaceful words combine to create a wonderful experience for the reader. Excellent poem!