You Can't Trust Anyone

It's sad expecting to hurt, expecting your heart to break.

The feeling makes you feel numb.

It hurts your stomach and you can bearly breathe.

So thats why you just decide to let go.

No hope, no cause, just let go.

It doesn't matter anymore.

Just giving yourself up to the world.

Because the pain is worse than you can bare.

You can't go through it for a second time.

But what happens when  the right person comes.

And you having no feeling to share because you threw them all away.

You're heartless and unopen.

That person will just have to move on, just like you did...

Because in the end, you don't have friends.

You can't trust anyone!

Author's Note

Like or Dislike? Anything?

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Not bad. Usually I love it when things take a turn for the darker side of life but this poem doesn't really hit me. I don't particularly relate to this, although I may have thought that I would at some points in my life. I don't like that the word "emo" is the first thing that comes to my mind on reading this because I don't really care for emo poetry. To me it is pointless and repetitive. But it is a decent poem and the emotion is well displayed.

[James Paulin]

I like the emotion and despair but the sentiment is incomplete with such a final statement that denies friendship is a reality. Sometimes it seems that way and your poem is reflective of feelings which may be important to remember when a true friend is found. I like your connection to inner turmoil.

[Toshita]

wow, so sad and heartfelt but true. nicely done :)

This is so sad!!

[Sseoni]

I loved this! It was powerful, real, and very well written! Wonderful poem! :D

[Havatara]

I liked it. It was confusing and erratic in some places, but it was still good. And in the third line, it's barely, not bearly. Other than that it was a nice piece.

[Daydreamer54]

I like it. i can feel emotion in the words.

[Doreen]

It's so true that pain can make us guarded. This is heartbreaking and sad.

[Sofia N]

I love it. This is so true, sometime you can't trust anyone but yourself and that feeling gets deeper as you get hurt and hurt by people..I love it..is really realistic..Great Job ;)

[Kaelyn Shea]

i like this i feel the same way towards all guys (no offense but ive been hurt to many times and so have my friends so...)