You Can't Trust Anyone

It's sad expecting to hurt, expecting your heart to break.

The feeling makes you feel numb.

It hurts your stomach and you can bearly breathe.

So thats why you just decide to let go.

No hope, no cause, just let go.

It doesn't matter anymore.

Just giving yourself up to the world.

Because the pain is worse than you can bare.

You can't go through it for a second time.

But what happens when  the right person comes.

And you having no feeling to share because you threw them all away.

You're heartless and unopen.

That person will just have to move on, just like you did...

Because in the end, you don't have friends.

You can't trust anyone!

Author's Note

Like or Dislike? Anything?

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Not bad. Usually I love it when things take a turn for the darker side of life but this poem doesn't really hit me. I don't particularly relate to this, although I may have thought that I would at some points in my life. I don't like that the word "emo" is the first thing that comes to my mind on reading this because I don't really care for emo poetry. To me it is pointless and repetitive. But it is a decent poem and the emotion is well displayed.

[An owl on the moon]

You share such a powerful depth of expression, how feelings that are devasted can drive us to despair and loneliness. Amazing insights.

[Jacqueline Lopez]

It's very and I enjoyed it.

[Lone Shadow]

Beautiful.

[Aussie]

Love it.Theres truth in your words.

[James Watts]

I feel the same way most of the time.

[.]

a rather myopic and sad outlook...I have found more than I have loss in risking to find more than I have

[Dom]

Good poem. :)

[jeff hackworth]

it is a good poem

[A.Lee]

Wow this is really good. Heart wrenching. It really tugged at my heart from the first line and by the end almost made me cry. I've been there so many times; not just with love interests, but with regular friends too... probably more actually. You did a terrific job on this one. Well done.

[Allison]

Very nice. Powerful.
Seems to hold a...poisonous mixture of sadness and anger in it, which is a great thing.
My only correction for this is to use 'breath' instead of 'breathe'. Breathe means "I take a breathe and face my fear", if you get what I mean in that context.
Awesome
~Pokie